VN Ren'Py Sort Of Justice [v0.1.0] [Creator Tom]

4.20 star(s) 12 Votes

flaviopaganini

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Feb 25, 2024
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Well .. so far, MC was only allowed to proove himself - in the ring and in the blindfold seat - or haplessly blunder through one or two jobs that were both way over his aptitude level - to put it mildly.
MC is so far in the ”thug for hire for any job” category while he prooved inadequate at best, totally useless at least, to both babes he was supposed to provide back-up to: The first girl got herself alone while MC was cage fighting - useless as a bodyguard and totally unimpressive or valued to the thugs in the room who simply dispatched him away from his objective in no time - while during the shoot-out, MC did not devize or execute any plan to overcome his deep seeded trauma with guns.

In better games or movies, a decomissioned gun would have consequences - getting thrown or something at the assailants to protecxt the slinger - but in this, MC has none of the serious consequences the other unsuccessful thugs got - getting beaten up or killed for their failures - MC gets rewarded for it as a total plot twist.

What saves this game is the Guy Ritchie total nonesense of the situation, where the big boss is threatening his long time partners on account of a young clueless grunt who has not prooven himself to be in any way useful in the jobs he was given:
the only jobs he had to do were - to protect a couple of girls on two separate situations - what ended up happening was that each girl found herself alone and totally exposed to the goons MC was supposed to shield them from.


For normal people - who live in the overly sexualised world where Brad Pit, Leonardo di caprio or Ariana Grande only do sex for stress relieve - they are utter shit human beings when it comes to family or long term relationships, or any kind of relationship at all - sex is supposed to calm them down and provide the dopamine overdrive to make their lives better by feeding their overblown egos.

Such as it is, MC is a toned young buck with little to nothing to offer to the seasoned criminals with whom he is now treading water with - so he will just be the tool to scratch their mentor/cougar/boss/daddy boners when it comes to how much respect he can be given in his situation.

From what I understand, the boss just wants him not to go after the woman who betrayed him, and the boss just wants to keep the MC away from everyone, so he made up this 'job.' In short, for the boss, it's better if the MC is just an errand boy. The test was only to see if he would reveal who he was working for, which is why the boss only cared about that and not about him getting caught. So much so that the boss got mad at Malena for putting him at risk.
 
4.20 star(s) 12 Votes