VN Ren'Py Origin Story [v0.4.0] [JDOR]

[gregers]

The villain/hero roles aren't that clearly defined (at least I hope not).

The game (through the headmaster) explicitly calling out how power will corrupt in the next chapter after the big sympathetic superpowered heroine was shown coercing an innocent captive into sex and her belatedly realizing (only if the MC called her on it) that this was Not A Cool Move might suggest that it's going for a more ambiguous take on morality. Then the MC gets called lame for not going along with it this chapter, so who knows.

Obviously the organization governing the powers/running the Sisterhood are set up to be the big bads, but for the sisters and their opponents we seem to be dealing more in shades of gray: They certainly aren't shy about killing and mutilating the people who cross them.

 

[Krytax123]

Damn the avn is so fucking goofy and immature (not necessarily in a bad way, its funny) and than it suddenly hits you with the emotions of a invisible girl and how badly it fucked up her life. I could really feel for her how much a power like that would just utterly suck

 

[Anon4321]

Damn the avn is so fucking goofy and immature (not necessarily in a bad way, its funny) and than it suddenly hits you with the emotions of a invisible girl and how badly it fucked up her life. I could really feel for her how much a power like that would just utterly suck

But there is hope for Amber
because near the end, you have a blink and you'll miss it moment

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Which could mean the answer to her problem is possibly emotional and possibly connected to the MC

 

[Krytax123]

But is hope for Amber
because near the end, you have a blink nad you'll miss it moment

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Which could mean the answer to her problem is possibly emotional and possibly connect to the MC

I wasnt really sure if it was meant as her really becoming visible or the dev giving us a first gimpse of her but you could be right. Im pretty sure it will work out and she wont get shipped of to japan

 

[Niuul]

The Milf "not my mom" being the ultimate supervillain is another thread. Wanted to know way too much about their lair and the prisoner facilities.

That's actually a good point, that didn't even cross my mind. Guess that's how she gets you though... low cut top while you spill all your secrets in casual conversation. lol.

 

[dolfe67]

Good game. A bit of The Boys/Gen V vibe with some touching moments (like the last scene of the udpate with the invisible girl)

Wish we could tailor MC's personality (hero/villain) but it's harder to write. Furthermore he's a bit too much of a perv, without player input. I was very surprised he told his story to the movie star (that he fucked a copy of her), without the player's say in it. But it seems this is a more promiscuous society than ours.

Other than that the writing's good, with some mysteries to keep us interested. Renders have room for improvement but not bad. I don't mind no animation, I prefer that than average ones. The sex scenes are nice anyway.

 

[Mamaragan]

Is there a moment where the MC stop being such a useless pussy or?

 

[gregers]

Is there a moment where the MC stop being such a useless pussy or?

He starts out as a powerless teenager in a world of superpowers; hopefully he'll develop a bit more initiative eventually. The latest chapter does have him stepping up to help Lake (even if he makes a bit of a pig's ear of it).

But yeah, it's part and parcel of the game that we don't get much granular control of the MC's actions or happenings around him: The branching is limited bordering on non-existent for now. Keeps dev manageable and makes coherent story-telling easier, but your mileage may vary.

 

[MAGO-DAG]

Is there a moment where the MC stop being such a useless pussy or?

I usually don't like it when different avn has weak Mc and a whiner who never grew in progress throughout the story. but in this game such Mc makes sense, the fact is that in every superhero movie the main characters started from low and rose up, remember every superhero?

for example, Spider-Man, who was a nerd, Batman, who seemed to be a private person with a rich soul and began to find value in superpowers, God can list them and list them, quite a lot of people went through weaknesses. So it's worth giving time to Mc, he grew up among all the superheroes where they were partially envious and of course this is new to him and he has to get used to it

 

[Punto]

Need a new german translation for v. 0.4.0

 

[Midnight Ghost]

I really like this game...
But NGL, I felt a little disappointed this chapter, only scene is a blowjob from a clone, spent a lot of time talking to Lady Steel and an invisible girl, not one scene of Parker not even a tease, and no Evelyn. I know I know, the dev said it was a short chapter with certain characters per chapters coming up. But have to wait another half year, feels bad man.

 

[Jericho85]

I really like this game...
But NGL, I felt a little disappointed this chapter, only scene is a blowjob from a clone, spent a lot of time talking to Lady Steel and an invisible girl, not one scene of Parker not even a tease, and no Evelyn. I know I know, the dev said it was a short chapter with certain characters per chapters coming up. But have to wait another half year, feels bad man.

It's not going to be half a year. This dev does a lot of pre-work. Chapter 5 should be out in 2~3 months.

 

[Joratox]

I really like this game...
But NGL, I felt a little disappointed this chapter, only scene is a blowjob from a clone, spent a lot of time talking to Lady Steel and an invisible girl, not one scene of Parker not even a tease, and no Evelyn. I know I know, the dev said it was a short chapter with certain characters per chapters coming up. But have to wait another half year, feels bad man.

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[gregers]

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If you go with the latter option, note that the script looks for the MC having exactly 100 funds. Anything other than that will be treated as not having enough.

 

[Anon4321]

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Whether or not you gave the homeless girl could possibly have 2 outcomes

1-Evelyn sees you in a better light
2-The Homeless girls play an important role down the line, depending on if you gave her money
3-It was just added as a moral lesson

 

[Midnight Ghost]

It's not going to be half a year. This dev does a lot of pre-work. Chapter 5 should be out in 2~3 months.

Yeah but it's chapter 6 that has the Parker stuff apparently, Evelyn will be in both it looks like. So Ch5 in 3 months, Ch6 another 3 months. It's just chapter 4 didn't have much of anything else, spent a chunk on Amber but you can't see her, can't even see her emotions, so hard to be invested in her and her story at the moment. /shrug

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That's cool, although have to play it selfish to get that route, still just a throwaway sex scene with a clone.

It's ok just have to stare at this in the meantime.

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[Anon4321]

Incase anyone missed it during the freeroaming in the MCs bedroom
make sure to check the email on the PC and a link within that email
as well check out the "mothers" bedroom

>>>

 

[SecretDesire]

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hey just a quick question , even if you have a sex with clone you still not getting her power right ? still need to have sex with original instead clone ?

 

[Jericho85]

hey just a quick question , even if you have a sex with clone you still not getting her power right ? still need to have sex with original instead clone ?

Yep. no power if it's with a clone/illusion.

Honestly with how drunk she was on MC's cock, I half expected the real one to drop concentration and lose her clone then burst into the stall to finish... inadvertently giving him her power.

Buuuut I guess that would have been too easy.

 

[gregers]

hey just a quick question , even if you have a sex with clone you still not getting her power right ? still need to have sex with original instead clone ?

Yeah, that's the conclusion they come to in-game. However, the game still sets a sneaky power-related variable which may come into play later. But that may just be to register that they've reached that conclusion.