Version Played: 0.81
Right off the bat, this featured some gorgeous renders and has one of my all-time fav themes of corruption from a female MC perspective.
In practice, and as another player pointed out, it sadly falls flat. The MC detachedly narrates what's happening and her reasoning and decisions to slut it up leads very much to a decidedly "men writing women" experience. To its credit, the frequency and intensity of those decisions are left up to the player including the ability to play a girl-only experience. Now, I'm certainly not expecting Nobel Prize in Literature tier writing, but something about it just feels off and the MC never really sells me on her desires or real sexual enjoyment either. Oddly, the two side girls (Violet and Luna) have slightly stronger writing and motivations.
Positives:
+ Main girls are all very cute (MC Rita is kinda weird-looking, but still really cute)
+ Lots of care paid to the renders (I especially love the care given to putting the girls in different clothing)
+ Great sex situation renders and some really hot scenes
Negatives:
- Writing for female characters feels off
- No gallery/event viewer
- Dudes are all a little too hung -- if everyone is huge, no one is huge
- No bush...(the writer even goes out of their way to say why on one girl...)
At the end of the day, the game is still very much recommended for fans of this kind of content and the care put into everything is evident.
It just needs that extra push to really take it up a notch.
Like it? Try!: The Chloe 18 series (though also unabashedly "men writing women" Chloe comes across as much more secretly(?) depraved and into what she gets herself into), Good Girl Gone Bad (this might be the "Queen" of this genre due to the depth of choices and quality of writing)
Note to Devs: Might be a little hard at this stage, but if you have access to women who wouldn't be weirded the fuck out by it, you could ask them for tips to make the characters (particularly Rita) more believeable.
Right off the bat, this featured some gorgeous renders and has one of my all-time fav themes of corruption from a female MC perspective.
In practice, and as another player pointed out, it sadly falls flat. The MC detachedly narrates what's happening and her reasoning and decisions to slut it up leads very much to a decidedly "men writing women" experience. To its credit, the frequency and intensity of those decisions are left up to the player including the ability to play a girl-only experience. Now, I'm certainly not expecting Nobel Prize in Literature tier writing, but something about it just feels off and the MC never really sells me on her desires or real sexual enjoyment either. Oddly, the two side girls (Violet and Luna) have slightly stronger writing and motivations.
Positives:
+ Main girls are all very cute (MC Rita is kinda weird-looking, but still really cute)
+ Lots of care paid to the renders (I especially love the care given to putting the girls in different clothing)
+ Great sex situation renders and some really hot scenes
Negatives:
- Writing for female characters feels off
- No gallery/event viewer
- Dudes are all a little too hung -- if everyone is huge, no one is huge
- No bush...(the writer even goes out of their way to say why on one girl...)
At the end of the day, the game is still very much recommended for fans of this kind of content and the care put into everything is evident.
It just needs that extra push to really take it up a notch.
Like it? Try!: The Chloe 18 series (though also unabashedly "men writing women" Chloe comes across as much more secretly(?) depraved and into what she gets herself into), Good Girl Gone Bad (this might be the "Queen" of this genre due to the depth of choices and quality of writing)
Note to Devs: Might be a little hard at this stage, but if you have access to women who wouldn't be weirded the fuck out by it, you could ask them for tips to make the characters (particularly Rita) more believeable.